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I'm a traditionally and self published author. I write in the genre of children and YA at the moment but working my way up to adults. I'm a sports loving, photo taking gal who loves to sing/dance to my own enjoyment. I love to laugh even at myself. I am also owned by 8 birds and 2 hamsters, and yes they know it. :)

Grammar Time


When one writes so much has to be taken into consideration. Is the plot line working, how is the pace and flow of the story and are we bringing our readers along for the ride or leaving them back at page four? We have to incorporate and weave scenes, characters and drama and make it all work together or else it will go nowhere. When we finally finish a book well that is just the beginning. The cliché that writing is the easy part I feel is dead on.

For once we are done we are now having to revise and edit. To me edit is an evil word but one that is needed and required. Some words we must pay certain attention to for it can change our sentence structure around.

Its vs. It’s: When I have to use either word I tend to pause sounding out the contraction to make sure I am using the right form. Its is possessive while it’s stands for It is.

I vs. me: I truly hate this one. What helps is if you separate the sentence. For example if you are not sure whether it is “Sharon and I will go” vs. “Sharon and me will go”, take them apart. You now have “Sharon will go” and “I will go” which both make sense. “Me will go” does not so hence you need to use the word I.

Another example of this is “Give it to Tom and me” or “Give it to Tom and I”. Separating the two you will have “Give it to Tom” vs. “Give it to me”. Both make sense so the correct word to use is me.

Your vs. You’re: This one does make me pause. Your is used as a modifier before a noun. For example: Your books. You’re means you are which would not make sense if you say you are books.

There vs. Their vs. They’re: There is the possessive form of they. They’re stands for they are. There tends to mean place and position.

This is their car.

Take a note of their names and addresses.

The child is theirs.

Sit over there.

I wouldn’t go there again.

Stop there before you make any more mistakes.

They’re going to the concert.

They’re making bread.

There are other examples that make me mutter such as effect vs. affect, to vs. too and then vs. than.

I won’t even bring up commas. They are the death of me and that is why I have an editor. Editing is not fun and while people have said they love to do it, I doubt those words will ever be uttered by me. So yes writing is the easy part as far as I am concern. The revising and editing are the hoops writers must go through to get their MS ready for the world to enjoy. It is not fun and that is probably while I still have three books to be edited. Instead I continue to write.

Murder

One of my son’s friends on Twitter has an interesting avatar. So much so my kid wanted to share it with me.  Busting into belly shaking laughter I told him he HAD to mail a copy of the picture to me. I love how the little things can make us just giggle, don’t you?

Links

Between the writing classes that have been taken, some useful links have been discovered. I thought this would be a good time to share them with my readers.

Online Communities

SheWrites

www.shewrites.com

Writer’s Digest Community

www.community.writersdigest.com

Backspace

www.bksp.org

Authonomy

www.authonomy.com

NaNoWriMo

www.nanowrimo.org

Writing.com

www.writing.com

Useful Websites

The Writing Room

www.writingroom.com

For Writers

www.forwriters.com

Writing World

www.writing-world.com

Explore Writing

www.explorewriting.co.uk

State and National Organizations

North Carolina Writers’ Network

www.ncwriters.org

Mystery Writers of America

www.mysterywriters.org

Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators

www.scbwi.org

Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America

www.sfwa.org

Some books of interest that one can find in the library:

Creative Writing by Dianne Doubtfire

Jump Start: How to Write from Everyday Life by Robert Wolf

Breathing Life Into Your Characters by Rachel Ballon

The Writer’s Idea Book by Jack Heffron

A Writer’s Guide to Fiction by Elizabeth Lyon

Two books that I refer to a lot are:

Hooked: Write Fiction That Grabs Readers at Page One and Never Lets Them Go by Les Edgerton

On Writing by Stephen King

I will be upfront and admit my bias for Mr. King. Being from the same state, we are rather proud of him.  Hopefully one of these links will bring some ideas, tips or resources to you. Good luck with your writings.