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A Nice Rejection

A Nice Rejection

Since February I have been submitting query letters to two of my books. Submitting one’s MS to publishers whether through email or smail is a long tedious process. There will be a rejection letter in your future. Odds are there will be many of these to show up on your doorstep. It is a fact we need to wrap our mind around. So long as we keep on submitting, this is just a stepping stone.

Recently one came in an email to me. There was one difference though, it was not a form letter. The publisher stated that due to a massive overflow of submissions they would be passing over my MS. But she continued to say that my MS was promising. She did not expand too much but to me this was a win. Not a win win but still something positive I could take from this. It’s a start on my path to getting my book in print.

Sharing this “good news” with others people agreed this was pretty cool news. Maybe I am doing something right was what filled my thoughts. Perhaps there is a publisher who is not overburdened with endless manuscripts.  Someone who would be willing to take a chance on an unknown like myself.

That is my hope as I continue to submit my various writings. My mantra is the same today as it has been since I started this journey. All I need is one person to say yes we love your MS. Just one.

SMOG Readability Formula

Have you ever wondered what age group you write for? Some of the lines blur between children, YA and adults. While some are clear-cut and obvious others are not so much.

There are some clever formulas one can use to calculate your written words to the age group of the readers. One such format is the SMOG Readability Formula. In short it counts 10 consecutive sentences in the beginning, middle and at the end of your story. It counts every word with three or more syllables in the 30 sentences regardless how many time it appears. It adds that total number and then compares it to the SMOG Conversion Table so we can determine what grade level we are writing toward.

There are some rules one needs to remember. A sentence is any string of words that ends in a period, exclamation point or a question mark, Words that have hyphens count as one word. Proper nouns are counted as words. If you have numbers in your story read them out loud to see how many syllables they have. In long sentences that have colons or semicolons followed by a list count each part of the list with the beginning phrase of the sentences as one sentence each. You also should count abbreviations as if they were not. Do not include verbs ending in “ed” or “es” for that will make the word have a third syllable.

This will give the writer a good clue of where their book is geared toward. I have found this particular useful for my writings when the line between the ages are so close together it is hard to determine who to pitch to. There will be some exceptions to the rule. By the time I was in 3rd grade the books being read by me were the ones my sister in high school was reading. You will have kids who are more advanced and will not fit this profile. But for the most part it’s a good starting point

Don’t have time to do all of this? Well it got easier. The link below gives you an opportunity to cut and paste from your story and it will calculate for you where the readability is.

http://www.readabilityformulas.com/free-readability-formula-tests.php

I am so glad these tools exist for us to take advantage off. This gives me one less thing to do which I happily embrace.

Kreativ Blogger Award

The lovely Kate http://katepolicani.com/ has nominated me for the Kreative Blogger Award. This is my first time and Kate thank you that did put a smile on my face.

The Rules:

1. Thank my nominator and provide a link to their blog

2.List seven things that readers might find interesting about me

3.Nominate seven other bloggers

4.Smile on the inside, it does a body good.

Seven things about me:

1-I am owned by eight birds.

2-I love walking in the rain, for real, but especially in the snow.

3-My favorite genre to read is horror.

4-I am a budding photographer

5-I read my bible daily.

6-I still miss my dad even though we lost him in the 70’s.

7-I hate to be bored.

Seven bloggers:

Tracy http://tracyjamesjones.wordpress.com/2012/05/30/coming-soon-2/

Tiffany http://tiffanyawhite.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/tele-tuesday-pretty-little-liars-is-pretty-fantastic-for-teen-tv/

Susie http://susielindau.com/2012/05/29/date-swap/

Tracey http://traceybaptiste.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/querying-the-two-words-you-need-to-hear/

Nancy http://workingmomadventures.com/2012/05/28/memorial-day/

Emlyn http://www.emlynchand.com/

Dina http://makingbabygrand.com/