Category Archives: Writing

Writing Groups

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Writing groups are essential if you are a writer. I am a member of quite a few in my area. It is not easy bringing forth a piece of your writing to any group as they dissect what you present to them. A main theme from most of my group is simple. The comments are just that, comments. You can take them, use part of them or use none at all. This is your story bottom line and only you can decide what comments will work for you.

Easier said then done. Any comment that is not in line with how you see your story can be hard to hear. You have to decide with a clear mind what works for you. When I submit I will wait two to three days before I look at the comments. If I look sooner I tend to get upset from what has been written. Giving it a few days gives me a clearer mind on what I want to keep or ignore.

For the group that I formed I have requested the ladies to not use the color red when they critique my works. Something about red brings me back to school and the memories that come with it.

But without writing groups to help you see your story from an unbias viewpoint is something I couldn’t do without. Would my first book have been picked up if I had not sent it through my writers group? I am not sure.

We have to have tough skins. Being a writer is not easy, it comes with a lot of ups and down. We are placing our work for the world to see. Not everyone is going to love it but I have a better chance of people liking it if I run it through my groups. They see our books in ways we don’t see it. They could see it in the ways that potential buyers would see it. And that alone is why I will continue to attend the meetings.

If you are not involved in a writing group, I strongly suggest you look into it

Defending my authors

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I read a lot of books and will collect them from authors I adore. The list includes James Patterson, Stephen King, Bentley Little and Agatha Christie. I am always on the lookout for a “new” author to discover and enjoy. At the moment it is Jason Pinter. My bookcases are pretty tight. I have six bookcases, four in my office, one in the sun room and one in the garage that I have to make room for. I won’t even bring up how many my husband has.

And while I love the authors above, it goes beyond that. I will defend them against people who belittle them. They and I have a loving relationship as I refer to them as James, Stephen, Bentley and Ms. Agatha. As many as I own, some the entire collection, I feel I have earned it.

Not everyone agrees with the choices of books I treasure. That is okay, everyone has different taste. However there are a few writers in my writing groups that have sneered at Patterson and King. My friends know, even if they agree with the sneers, to not bring this up with me. I will stop mid-step and look at them. They know I am gearing up for an argument.

The remarks have been that they are relics and they are not great writers. This last reference was to James. I explained that his style was more along the lines of story telling which is not an easy thing to do successfully. But my words have always fallen by the waste side.

I tried a different approach now. With them being writers who are trying to make it big, I say this instead, “When you become as successful as King and Patterson, then we will talk. When you can command the contracts they have, I will sit down with you and we can compare notes. But until then, I don’t want, no that isn’t right, I won’t hear of it.”

That tends to slow people down. I try my best to not belittle authors that are out there. Whether I like their writings or not is really a moot point. They are doing what they love and being a success at it. Who am I to toss darts? They are doing what I am trying to do. For me, I say more power to them. Congratulations. Hopefully I will get there where we can have a round table discussion on the writing. Until then to the writers who belittle the ones doing it well, I say back off. And only come back when you are in a position to talk.

 

An Author’s Inteview: Heather B. Moon

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Today I am interviewing, for the first time, my gal pal Heather B. Moon. She is a wonderful artist and author. I am happy to host her on my site.

1-Can you give us a brief bio about yourself and your background for my readers?

Heather B. Moon was born in Royton, Lancashire in 1956. She attended Royton and Crompton Secondary School, Tameside College, and Mather College of Education, Manchester. She gained a Teacher’s Certificate in Primary Education in 1978. Heather is married with two grown children, Kris and Lucy, and two beautiful grandchildren, Louie and Amelie.

After teaching for some time in the Oldham and Rochdale area, Heather and her husband, Ian, acquired their own school in the north of England. Together, they managed the school for a number of years before retiring to Cornwall in 1999.

Many hours of reading stories out loud to children in her class has given Heather the experience to know just what holds their attention. She believes a fidgety child at story time is a bored child. The story must keep moving forward, and the child should want to turn the page.

2-What first inspired you to write? Have you always had a passion to write?

The children I have taught over the years inspired me to write. I just love to see their faces when I read to them. They have been my inspiration.

3-Why are you an author?

Good question! If I am walking, gardening, painting the house, traveling, or even just gazing into shop windows, I am always in the world of fantasy. It drives my husband bananas!(You see, I can now imagine bananas in pajamas!)

4-How long have you been writing?

In my head, I have been writing for as long as I can remember. Realistically though, I am pretty new to it all. I wrote my first book in the Tillie series about two years ago.

5-How did you come up with the idea for your series?

If I had known just how challenging it was, perhaps I would have started by writing just the one book in the Tillieseries instead of three all at once. I had three plots whirling away in my head, and kept coming up with different ideas. In my first book, Tillie is whisked away by a ghost horse. I came up with this idea as I rode through a grapefruit plantation in Jamaica on a beautiful ex-racehorse.

Tillie and the Voodoo Kid evolved as I was bombarded with tangerines whilst lazing on a sun lounger in St. Kitts. A cheeky little imp hid behind a palm tree as my husband and I looked around in confusion, trying to work out where the tangerines were coming from.

As I walked along the cliff path in Cornwall, I came up with the idea of something evil happening underground as I spotted a bright blue snail crawling along the ground. This led to Tillie and the Weird Christmas Tree. The biggest challenge, though, is the editing because there is so much to get through with the three books. I am looking forward to writing the fourth book in the series, and just concentrating on one story and one lot of illustrations.

6-Why did you choose this genre/this age group?

My experience with teaching and reading to children drew me to this genre. I just loved to see the expressions on children’s faces when we came to an exciting part. I always knew that if we came to a prolonged description of something in a book, they would become fridgety. If that happened, I would skip some of the passages, and make up my own shorter version as I went along.

I have now devised a system to discover if I am writing anything tedious. I read it out loud to my long-suffering husband, and watch to see if he fidgets. I have taught children of all ages, from nursery age to 16 years. I thought I would begin somewhere in the middle, as I loved teaching the 8 to 9-year-old children the most. They are just at that age that they respect everything you do with them, and give back some great response in return.

7-How do you go about writing? Do you have music playing? Do you have a routine that you go through before you start? What is the atmosphere like when you sit to write?

I need absolute silence. If I am interrupted, I resemble the girl in the Exorcist. I need coffee, too. Time just seems to get gobbled up when I am writing or painting. My husband will say, ‘Are we eating soon?’ I will then think, ‘It can’t be 6pm already!’

8-How long did it take for you to start your novel up until completion? What issues, if any, did you have to deal with to finish your book?

I can finish a book in about a week if left alone without interruptions, but then the editing and revising then has to go on for weeks. It has to be submitted to the publisher, and then goes for editing. After that, the illustrations are chosen. Positioning the illustrations with the correct text also has to be thought out carefully.

9-What are your goals for the future now that the books are out?

I have book four of the Tillie series buzzing around in my head. I have completed the plot planning, but am doing a little more research on certain places in Europe and bees. I want Tillie to be driven around Europe in an RV to help save the whole of the world’s bee population.

I also have a series of rhyming books for the younger age group in my head, but I am presently participating in RhyPIBoMo, which is a fabulous event organized by my author friend, Angie  Karcher. This is helping with future ideas and how to avoid common mistakes.

10-What projects should we expect to see from you in the future?

The Biggest Nastypalaian in the World, the fourth book in the Tillie series.

Silly Trunk and the Ickle-Prickle Plant, a rhyming book for younger readers.

I also intend to expand my webpage to offer my art services to others. I recently enjoyed the private commission of painting, Jasper: Amazon Parrot, and would love to complete more pet portraits or landscapes. I can work just from a photograph with any media in any size canvas. I am sure Jasper can endorse my work and recommend me!

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11-What words of advice would you give to other writers.

Just be yourself.

The three ‘P’s:

Perseverance

Practice

Patience

Most of all just keep on going, and do not let any rejections stop you from writing. The only way you will be guaranteed failure is by stopping what you do.

 

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